CLB Writing: Before and After

(1)Before

An exciting ski trip

I had never gone skiing before. It was the first time to go skiing in my life. with wearing boots and helmet, I found that it would be very difficult to walking on the snow, not mention to slide. After getting up, tumbling backwards and getting up again, I finally controlled my balance and could ski gently.

I enjoyed this activity because, unlike many other sports. It was not competitive. when I went skiing I did not compete with other people, and there was no audience cheering me on. The only competitor was myself as I must control both my body and mind. I found this to be a rewarding and challenging experience.

   

(2)After

An Exciting Ski Trip

I had never gone skiing before. It was the first time going skiing in my life. With boots and helmet on, I found  it  very difficult to walk on the snow, not mention  slide. After getting up, tumbling backwards and getting up again, I finally got my balance and could ski gently.

I enjoyed this activity because, unlike many other sports, It was not competitive. When I went skiing.  I did not compete with other people, and there was no audience cheering me on. The only competitor was myself as I had to controlled both my body and mind. I found this to be a rewarding and challenging experience.